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帮人写篇小论文,自己业务、领域不熟,很多东西搞不定,烦死了,这是上个请教贴,大家没帮上忙,但是还是很感谢的啦
http://www.delphibbs.com/delphibbs/dispq.asp?lid=3746151

这次是论文的摘要部分,需要翻成英文,切记,别拿Google蒙我哦@@

我国持续进行的医保改革对医院信息化管理既是一个难得的机遇,也是一个严峻的挑战。医保改革要求医院的经营和管理信息化、标准化、统一化,可是,目前国内医院规模大小、科室设置、管理模式区别较大,单一的医院信息系统无法满足多个医院不同的运营状况。针对当前医院信息系统中执行环境和需求的变化性,提出了一种基于分布式工作流技术的系统框架。在该框架中,各个功能子模块可以动态组装和运行,以实现分布式工作流系统的柔性和扩展性从而提高了医院信息系统对运行环境的适应性。

google翻的如下,关键字可以采用,但是语序、词性什么都是错的
China's ongoing reform of the hospital information management is a rare opportunity, but it also is a serious challenge. Medicare reform will require hospitals operating and management information, standardization and harmonization, but the current domestic hospital size, Departments set, a management model distinction larger, single hospital information systems are unable to meet a number of different hospitals operating conditions. In view of the current hospital information system environment and the demand for the implementation of the changes, Based on a distributed workflow technology systems framework. In this framework, the various functional module dynamically assembled and operated Distributed to work flow system flexibility and scalability to enhance the Hospital Information System running on the environmental adaptability.

翻的好可以另加分,别的不多,就分多,可以另开贴给
 
樓主翻譯得比較專業啊

我覺得"ongoing reform" 和"but the current domestic hospital size, Departments set, a management model distinction larger," 應該可以改得更good一些。
 
其它的翻譯得夠地道了
 
谢谢2楼顶了
不过说真的,里边好多词性不对的@@
Medicare reform will require hospitals operating and management information, standardization and harmonization,
require sb/sth adj.吧好象?
 
可以這樣翻譯
 
如果在英語考試中寫出這樣的句子,樓主的英語水平應該在CET-6左右。
 
樓主的英語水平應該在CET-6左右。
呵呵,左也左不到哪里去啊,刚好是6
上边的翻译是google翻的,本人看着头晕,所以找高手帮下忙
 
樓主的英語水平應該在CET-6左右。
呵呵,左也左不到哪里去啊,刚好是6
上边的翻译是google翻的,本人看着头晕,所以找高手帮下忙
 
The ongoing medicare reform of China is a rare opportunity for hospitals, but it also is a serious challenge. Medicare reform will require hospitals management information-based, standardization and harmonization. But there are great differences between some hospitals such as size, departments setup, management model, only one hospital information system software is unable to meet a number of different hospitals operating conditions. To solve some common problems which the changes of the HIS environment and the demand lead to, a HIS framework based on distributed workflow technology is introduced in this paper. In this framework, the various functional module are assembled and operated dynamically by a distributed workflow engine. The flexibility and scalability of workflow system can enhance the environmental adaptability of HIS.
 
接受答案了.
 
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