论文摘要翻译-急!(100分)

逆风

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这是我毕业论文的摘要部分,在下英文一般,自己翻译的英文摘要部分感觉还有很多不足,
希望E文好的大侠,帮我翻译或者修改一下。万分感谢!

旅游电子商务网
【摘要】 旅游电子商务是一种源于传统经济,又区别于传统经济的商业模式。由于旅游业与网络经济的天然契合性,因特网顺理成章地介入旅游业,旅游电子商务创造了一种新的旅游经营规则,突破了传统经营模式与手段,建立现代旅游管理信息系统,避免手工作坊式运营,无序化竞争,形成规模化、产业化、标准化的旅游发展新格局。它将彻底改变当今旅行社的运作模式和体制形态,使传统的旅游经营发生革命性的变化。本文通过用软件工程原理,从需求分析、设计、程序编码、测试、维护等环节来介绍和论述旅游电子商务网站的开发、运营、维护。
E-commerce website for Tourism
Abstract
E-commerc is a sort of commerce mode that both root in traditional economy and know from traditional economy becase tourism is inherent fit for net economy,so Internet enter into tourism naturally,E-commerce for Tourism creat a new tour management rule,it breaked the traditional management mode and means,found a mordem information system,avoiding handcraft-workshop management and out-of-order competition,to form a new tour development form which is sweeping, industrial,standard.It will changes the operation mode of travel agency nowadays and system appearance thoroughly, make the traditional tourism management have a revolution variety.The thesis make use of the principle of software engineering: analysis of needs, designing, programme codeing,test,supports etc to introduce and expound the exploitation,management,and maintenance of the E-commerce website for Tourism.
 

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Summary
E-commerce is derived from traditional commerce and yet has its own different and new features. Owning to the fact that tourism is closely related to online commerce, Internet is naturally introduced. E-commerce for Tourism creates a new set of rules for tourism development, which surpasses the traditional way of development. Meanwhile E-commerce requires a modern tourism managing system based on information technology, avoiding manual management as well as haphazard competitions and forming a new tourism management which is up to industrial standard. It will totally change the system and operation of travel agencies, which is a great revolution. The thesis makes use of the principle of software engineering, including analysis of requirement, designing, programme coding, testing and maintenance etc., to introduce and explain the development, management and maintenance of the E-commerce website for Tourism.
 

太阳火

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几点建议:
1)英文好像是逐字翻译的,很多单词语境不对
2)中文的论文有几句话也是有点...
“由于旅游业与网络经济的天然契合性”,
例如这句话,看不出有什么“天然契合性”
 

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